ext_23504 ([identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] febobe 2009-05-19 09:53 pm (UTC)

Ah, I like that you switched to Frodo's pov for this part. It's scary, but there's a bit of comfort for him in being held close to Arwen.

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