Oh, sweetie! It turned out beautifully. It made me cry happy tears when Frodo gave the drawing to Bilbo. He's such a wonderful little hobbit, and Bilbo is perfect as his guardian. They are so dear together.
(I saw a couple of little typos in my part of it, if you want to correct them. In my first paragraph, it says the windows were opened back to allow the sweet fragrance... there should an "and" there. And in the paragraph where Bilbo says "Well...I supposed that would be all right." Supposed should be "suppose.")
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Date: 2008-08-17 03:26 am (UTC)(I saw a couple of little typos in my part of it, if you want to correct them. In my first paragraph, it says the windows were opened back to allow the sweet fragrance... there should an "and" there.
And in the paragraph where Bilbo says "Well...I supposed that would be all right." Supposed should be "suppose.")